ABC Education · 11+ Practice
Week 18 · English Practice Paper
Reading: 30 marks · Writing: 20 marks · Suggested time: 1 hour 15 minutes.
Reading Passage
This passage describes what happens when Dr Petra Voss, a wildlife ranger, brought an orphaned fox cub called Clover to visit a village primary school during its nature week.
Clover Goes to School
By the spring, Clover had grown fast and bold. From a wobbly, round-eared cub barely bigger than a shoe, she had become long-legged and quick, with a coat that had darkened from grey-brown fluff into proper red-gold fur. She was not yet four months old, but she already stood taller at the shoulder than most house cats, and her paws — enormous, out of all proportion to the rest of her — gave her the permanent look of a creature about to trip over her own feet. She never did. Her eyes had settled into a sharp amber, with the narrow, watchful shape of a fox's rather than a cub's.
In those early weeks she could barely sit still, and Petra had nicknamed her 'the Whirlwind' for the way she tore around the cottage, upending anything not fixed down (and one or two things that were). It quickly became clear that Clover could not be left alone in the house, so Petra began taking her everywhere, and it was with more than a little nervousness that she first drove Clover into the village to visit the primary school for its nature week.
As it turned out, that first morning passed without disaster. Petra had worn Clover out with a long walk beforehand, so that once she'd grown used to thirty pairs of curious eyes staring down at her, she curled up under the teacher's desk and fell fast asleep. She woke partway through the second lesson and spent a happy few minutes attacking a child's shoelace, which everybody agreed was a welcome bit of entertainment.
It was not always so peaceful. After a few visits, Clover developed a taste for hunting down anything that rustled, which meant crisp packets, sandwich wrappers, and — on one memorable occasion — a girl's entire packed lunch, extracted neatly from an unzipped bag while its owner was occupied with a maths worksheet. Sensing a growing tide of complaints from hungry children, Petra started adding a note to the information sheet she gave each class before a visit. Alongside the usual facts about diet and habitat, there would now be a short paragraph that read:
Please Note: Clover is friendly and will not bite. However, if your lunch is anywhere within reach, we cannot promise it will survive the visit! Please keep bags zipped at all times.
It was something of a miracle that no one ever complained too seriously.
Section A: Reading
Question 1
[1 marks]The best title for the passage is: a) The Wandering Fox b) Clover Goes to School c) A Ranger's Diary d) Life in the Countryside
Question 2
[1 marks]The details in the first paragraph most strongly convey that: a) Clover has changed dramatically in appearance b) Clover is unwell c) Clover is not friendly d) Clover has stopped growing
Question 3
[1 marks]Clover's paws are described as 'enormous, out of all proportion'. This most vividly suggests that: a) She is unwell b) She has not finished growing into her adult size c) She wears special boots d) She dislikes walking
Question 4
[1 marks]The most appropriate way to describe Clover in paragraph 2 is: a) Like a small hurricane b) Silent and still c) Slow and careful d) Shy and withdrawn
Question 5
[1 marks]Petra can't leave Clover at home alone, but she is worried about taking her to the school. Which phrase best describes Petra's feelings? a) Confident and relaxed b) Nervous, but prepared c) Excited and proud d) Bored and indifferent
Question 6
[1 marks]Clover did not cause any problems during the first visit. The reasons for this were: (tick all which apply) a) She was exhausted from a long walk b) She hid under the teacher's desk c) The children ignored her completely d) She had been to the school many times before
Question 7
[1 marks]The passage implies that the nature week visits are generally: a) Boring for the children b) A necessary chore c) Popular and entertaining d) Too dangerous to continue
Question 8
[1 marks]The events of paragraph 4 strongly suggest that: (tick all which apply) a) Clover has a strong hunting instinct b) The children always keep their bags zipped c) Petra is trying to prevent further problems d) Clover is no longer welcome at the school
Question 9
[1 marks]The adjective that best applies to the note Petra gives out about Clover is: a) Unimportant b) Cautionary c) Irrelevant d) Insulting
Question 10
[1 marks]The tone or mood of the passage is best described as: a) Serious and alarming b) Reflective and humorous c) Sad and regretful d) Formal and technical
Question 11
[2 marks]Petra describes Clover's appearance in the first paragraph. How do the phrases 'darkened from grey-brown fluff into proper red-gold fur' and 'sharp amber' make the fox seem more interesting?
Question 12
[2 marks]Why does Petra nickname Clover 'the Whirlwind'?
Question 13
[1 marks]Why is Clover's attack on the child's shoelace 'welcomed'?
Question 14
[1 marks]What does Petra add to the information sheet she gives out before each visit?
Question 15
[4 marks]Explain, using words or phrases from the passage, why Petra was worried about Clover's developing 'taste for hunting down anything that rustled'.
Question 16
[10 marks]Imagine you are one of the children in the classroom and you have just realised that the fox has taken your packed lunch. What are your thoughts and feelings?
Section B: Writing
Choose ONE of the following:
- There are 20 marks for this section: 10 marks for the content of your writing and 10 marks for the quality of your writing.
- You must choose ONE of the following pieces of writing.
Option 1: Write a story using the title: 'A Day I'll Never Forget'.
- Plan your story before you begin writing.
- Make sure your story has a clear beginning, middle and end.
Option 2: Write a letter to your head teacher explaining why the school should support an animal charity of your choice.
- Use a clear, persuasive tone and organise your points logically.
- Remember to include a proper greeting and sign-off appropriate for a letter to your head teacher.