ABC Education · 11+ Practice

Week 44 · English Practice Paper

Reading: 25 marks · Writing: 40 marks · Suggested time: 1 hour 15 minutes.

Reading Passage

Read the poem below carefully, then answer the questions that follow. Spend around 15 minutes on this section.

The Early Shift

You came home most mornings just as I left for school, keys turning in the lock as my toast went cold. You never meant to wake me, you always said, though I heard the click of the door regardless, the careful, quiet weight of your footsteps crossing the kitchen tiles in your work shoes. Some mornings I found you still at the table, coat buttoned up, too tired to take it off, warming your hands round a mug you wouldn't drink from. You'd ask about my spellings, or my times tables, though your eyes were already halfway to sleep. Of course, you said, you'd only just got in. Parents' evenings. Sports days. The school play. The birthday party. The dentist. Prize-giving day. You always said you'd swapped a shift specially, just this once, though somehow it happened every time. Only just managed it. Only just made it in time. No one else's mother arrived quite so tired, or quite so sure she would come. Now I am older, and no longer need someone waiting at the door when I get home. I think of all those mornings differently — the mug you wouldn't drink from, the coat still buttoned, the tired, patient way you asked your questions, and I understand, now, what you were really saying.

Section A: Reading

Question 1

[5 marks]

What themes are explored in this poem? Give evidence from the poem and explain how they are handled. (5 marks)

Question 2

[5 marks]

What interests you about the language used in the poem? Use some examples and explain what effects are achieved. (5 marks)

Question 3

[5 marks]

What interests you about the structure and form of the poem? Talk about line breaks, stanza length, repetition, and explain the effects achieved. (5 marks)

Question 4

[5 marks]

Do you think the mother loves her child? Give reasons for your answer. (5 marks)

Question 5

[5 marks]

How would you describe the tone of this poem, and do you think the poet wants us to sympathise with the speaker? Give reasons for your answer. (5 marks)

Section B: Writing

Choose ONE of the following:

  • This is a composition paper. Please complete ONE task from Section A (Fiction Writing) and ONE task from Section B (Non-Fiction Writing) — two pieces of writing in total.
  • Spend around 30 minutes on each task.
  • Thoughtful planning before you start will help you — examiners are particularly interested in your ability to describe characters, feelings and places in ways that bring your writing to life for the reader.

Option 1: Section A, Option 1: Describe a sunrise flight in a hot air balloon, in which you appeal to the reader's senses to recreate the experience.

  • Focus on sensory description rather than a fast-moving plot.

Option 2: Section A, Option 2: Imagine either a lighthouse keeper or a circus ringmaster. Describe their physical appearance and habits in some detail.

  • Think about creating a vivid picture in the reader's mind.
  • You could suggest things about their personality through this description.
  • Remember — this is a description of a character, not a story.

Option 3: Section A, Option 3: "The wind kept flinging handfuls of grit against the shutters, as if determined to find some way in — and still she climbed, her fingers numb, the whole sky pressing down grey and merciless above the ridge." Write a continuation of this scene.

  • Try to maintain the atmosphere created in the passage above.

Option 4: Section B, Option 1: Write a letter to a pen pal describing a memorable day out you have had recently.

  • Keep your chosen reader in mind throughout.

Option 5: Section B, Option 2: Write a short article for your school magazine in which you advise other pupils on the best ways of looking after a class pet.

  • Make sure that you do what is asked in the task and keep the chosen reader in mind.

Option 6: Section B, Option 3: Your teacher has asked you to give a short speech to the rest of your class on the importance of recycling. Write out your speech.

  • Think carefully about the ways in which you will engage your audience.